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Här kan ni posta texter som ni inte är 100% på, så kan andra hjälpa till att reda ut vad det är Eddie sjunger (har märkt att "Eddie" på forumet verkar vara en hejare på det).
Sedan när vi är överens om att texten är bra så kan vi posta den i tråden "Texter på papper".
Sedan när vi är överens om att texten är bra så kan vi posta den i tråden "Texter på papper".
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CHEROKEE INDIANS:
Cherokee Indians you know the white men has treat us right
Cherokee Indians pick up your axe and start the fight
Let us show the men who took our country
With the men and our rights
We were free and proud men
Lived together with out hate
Then the came the white men
Forced us into reservate
They been steeling a country
Steeling our souls
Now every day
Is a tower of hate
When despise them all (osäker)
With the Cherokee Indians
Waiting for our last revenge
Cherokee Indians you know the white men has treat us right
Cherokee Indians pick up your axe and start the fight
Let us show the men who took our country
With the men and our rights
SOLO
Cherokee Indians you know the white men has treat us right
Cherokee Indians pick up your axe and start the fight
Let us show the men who took our country
With the men and our rights
Cherokee Indians Cherokee Indians .. Cherokee Indians
Cherokee Indians you know the white men has treat us right
Cherokee Indians pick up your axe and start the fight
Let us show the men who took our country
With the men and our rights
We were free and proud men
Lived together with out hate
Then the came the white men
Forced us into reservate
They been steeling a country
Steeling our souls
Now every day
Is a tower of hate
When despise them all (osäker)
With the Cherokee Indians
Waiting for our last revenge
Cherokee Indians you know the white men has treat us right
Cherokee Indians pick up your axe and start the fight
Let us show the men who took our country
With the men and our rights
SOLO
Cherokee Indians you know the white men has treat us right
Cherokee Indians pick up your axe and start the fight
Let us show the men who took our country
With the men and our rights
Cherokee Indians Cherokee Indians .. Cherokee Indians
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DONT BRING ME DOWN:
Dont bring me down .. dont bring med down
I got a stop think things over before I lose my mind
Because you are such a good friend but I want you for mine
And if cant have you baby I still want you as a friend
But if I told you have I feel would you laugh at med then
Dont bring me down I couldnt stand to fail again
Dont bring me down I want you more than a friend
I really do love you woman and I can tell you its tuff
I wanna give you just everything only the best is good enough
So if you really do want him just take him and leave
And thou I grouch you to loving I still which you loved me (osäker)
Dont bring me down I couldnt stand to fail again
Dont bring me down cloud you see Im just the man
SOLO
I really do love you woman and I can tell you its tuff
I wanna give you just everything only the best is good enough
So if you really do want him just take him and leave
And do I grouch you to loving I still which you loved me
Dont bring me down I couldnt stand to fail again
Dont bring me down I want you more than a friend
Dont bring me down I couldnt stand to lose again
Dont bring me down cloud you see Im just the man
Dont bring me down . Dont bring me down
Dont bring me down .. dont bring med down
I got a stop think things over before I lose my mind
Because you are such a good friend but I want you for mine
And if cant have you baby I still want you as a friend
But if I told you have I feel would you laugh at med then
Dont bring me down I couldnt stand to fail again
Dont bring me down I want you more than a friend
I really do love you woman and I can tell you its tuff
I wanna give you just everything only the best is good enough
So if you really do want him just take him and leave
And thou I grouch you to loving I still which you loved me (osäker)
Dont bring me down I couldnt stand to fail again
Dont bring me down cloud you see Im just the man
SOLO
I really do love you woman and I can tell you its tuff
I wanna give you just everything only the best is good enough
So if you really do want him just take him and leave
And do I grouch you to loving I still which you loved me
Dont bring me down I couldnt stand to fail again
Dont bring me down I want you more than a friend
Dont bring me down I couldnt stand to lose again
Dont bring me down cloud you see Im just the man
Dont bring me down . Dont bring me down
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THE KING'S HORSES:
Jag har nog skrivt ord som inte finns, men det är så jag tycker att det låter som han sjunger eller vad man ska säga.
The first time that I heard them coming by
It was a sound like thunder from the sky
And mama said dont run in hide
Its not the thunder but the man who ride . the kings horses
The man sat of outside and lintel in
The commandant wilt sadden me in brind(väldigt osäker)
He said while mamas eyes went wide
Tonight well take your daddy out to ride .. the kings horses
For a king is a king and a present is a present
And the laws always made for the king
And the kings been a pay and they do what he tells them to do
So when they was all finished my father was ded
And I began to hate the man who rode .. the kings horses
I swore that some day they would bleed
The same way that my father did
The way to satisfy my soul
Can only be to kill the man who rode . the kings horses
The time went by and I went big and strong
I still remember those who did wrong
I practise hard with hands and feet
Still dreaming of the day when would meet . the kings horses
But a king is a king and a man is a man
When youre poor youre not hard to push rate
And the king had the money and I had the hunger and strength
And he saw I was strong and he bought me
And I forgot my holy mole from the among the kings horses
And so with pain I had survive
The crying boys I heard inside
The only way I could survive
Was to become one of the men who ride .. the kings horses
I often thought that it is very strange
The money and the power make you change
Today I kill him right been fight
Together with the rules man who ride the kings horses
Jag har nog skrivt ord som inte finns, men det är så jag tycker att det låter som han sjunger eller vad man ska säga.
The first time that I heard them coming by
It was a sound like thunder from the sky
And mama said dont run in hide
Its not the thunder but the man who ride . the kings horses
The man sat of outside and lintel in
The commandant wilt sadden me in brind(väldigt osäker)
He said while mamas eyes went wide
Tonight well take your daddy out to ride .. the kings horses
For a king is a king and a present is a present
And the laws always made for the king
And the kings been a pay and they do what he tells them to do
So when they was all finished my father was ded
And I began to hate the man who rode .. the kings horses
I swore that some day they would bleed
The same way that my father did
The way to satisfy my soul
Can only be to kill the man who rode . the kings horses
The time went by and I went big and strong
I still remember those who did wrong
I practise hard with hands and feet
Still dreaming of the day when would meet . the kings horses
But a king is a king and a man is a man
When youre poor youre not hard to push rate
And the king had the money and I had the hunger and strength
And he saw I was strong and he bought me
And I forgot my holy mole from the among the kings horses
And so with pain I had survive
The crying boys I heard inside
The only way I could survive
Was to become one of the men who ride .. the kings horses
I often thought that it is very strange
The money and the power make you change
Today I kill him right been fight
Together with the rules man who ride the kings horses
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Jo, dina versioner tycker jag är bättre än mina GM. Det vi båda är osäkra på får "Eddie" rätta till
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I'LL BE SAVED:
Someday soon the sun and moon
Will shine the way for me no more days on crying ways
One day Ill be free when the trumpets sound Ill be of the ground
And Im gonna fly like an eagle in the welted skies
One fine day Ill be saved and he will take my hand
No more greed hes with me and he will understand
When the suns go down the light from him will light my way
And there only be tomorrow cause there never be no yesterday
Some sweet day he call my way and Ill will be saved
No more tears and no more fears and no more misery
Brighter days in every way only joy for me
When I hear him call I will leave it all
Walking in this race and forget about my yesterday
One fine day Ill be saved and he will take my hand
No more greed hes with me and he will understand
When the suns go down the light from him will light my way
And there only be tomorrow cause there never be no yesterday
Some sweet day he call my way and Ill will be saved
Some sweet day he call my way and Ill will be saved
Someday soon the sun and moon
Will shine the way for me no more days on crying ways
One day Ill be free when the trumpets sound Ill be of the ground
And Im gonna fly like an eagle in the welted skies
One fine day Ill be saved and he will take my hand
No more greed hes with me and he will understand
When the suns go down the light from him will light my way
And there only be tomorrow cause there never be no yesterday
Some sweet day he call my way and Ill will be saved
No more tears and no more fears and no more misery
Brighter days in every way only joy for me
When I hear him call I will leave it all
Walking in this race and forget about my yesterday
One fine day Ill be saved and he will take my hand
No more greed hes with me and he will understand
When the suns go down the light from him will light my way
And there only be tomorrow cause there never be no yesterday
Some sweet day he call my way and Ill will be saved
Some sweet day he call my way and Ill will be saved
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Japp loosing ska det vara.
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Det du har skrivit bredvid stämmer nog, tror jag.
Men But your voice is out tonight, so if I don't get through I can take you instead får jag till But your voice sounds so nice so if you don't get through I can take you instead. Att han säger "Men din röst låter så trevilg så om du inte klarar av att koppla mig så kan jag ta dig istället". Nu var det ju inte ordagrant översatt men liksom att det är det han menar med den meningen.
Men But your voice is out tonight, so if I don't get through I can take you instead får jag till But your voice sounds so nice so if you don't get through I can take you instead. Att han säger "Men din röst låter så trevilg så om du inte klarar av att koppla mig så kan jag ta dig istället". Nu var det ju inte ordagrant översatt men liksom att det är det han menar med den meningen.
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Jag gör väl likadantGM wrote:Det ser ganska bra ut. Men endel saker har jag fått till annorlunda när jag har lyssnat. Jag har kopierat din text och ändrat på de ställen som jag skulle ha skrivit annorlunda.

Cherokee Indians you know the white men would treat us right
Cherokee Indians dig up your axe and start to fight
Let us show the men who took our country
We're demanding our rights
We were free and proud men
Lived together without hate
Then they came the white men
Forced us into reservates
They've been stealing our country
Stealing our souls
Now every day
Is a tower of hate
When desping them all
We're the Cherokee Indians
Waiting for our last revenge
Cherokee Indians you know the white men would treat us right
Cherokee Indians dig up your axe and start to fight
Let us show the men who took our country
We're demanding our rights
SOLO
Cherokee Indians you know the white men would treat us right
Cherokee Indians dig up your axe and start to fight
Let us show the men who took our country
We're demanding our rights
Cherokee Indians Cherokee Indians .. Cherokee Indians
"Ofärdiga texter"
Dont bring me down .. dont bring med down
I've got to stop and think things over before I loose my mind
Because you are such a good friend but I want you for mine
And if I cant have you baby I still want you as a friend
But if I told you how I feel, would you laugh at me then?
Dont bring me down, I couldnt stand to fail again
Dont bring me down, I want you more than a friend
I really do love you woman and I can tell you it's tough
I wanna give you just everything only the best is good enough
So if you really do want him, just take him and leave
And though I ..., I still wish you loved me
Dont bring me down, I couldnt stand to lose again
Dont bring me down, can't you see Im just a man?
SOLO
I really do love you woman and I can tell you it's tough
I wanna give you just everything only the best is good enough
So if you really do want him just take him and leave
And though I...., I still wish you loved me
Dont bring me down, I couldnt stand to fail again
Dont bring me down, I want you more than just a friend
Dont bring me down, I couldnt stand to lose again
Dont bring me down, can't you see Im just a man?
Dont bring me down . Dont bring me down
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Hmm, har väldigt svårt att komma på vad det ska vara i punkterna, men put är det iaf inte. Någon som har en idé?
"Ofärdiga texter"
The first time that I heard them coming by
It was a sound like thunder from the sky
And mama said "Dont run and hide"
Its not the thunder but the men who ride . the kings horses
The men sat of outside our little in
The commandant got sight of me and grined
He said while mamas eyes went wide
"Tonight well take your daddy out to ride .. the kings horses"
For a king is a king and a peasant is a peasant
And the laws always made for the king
And the kings men a paid and they do what he tells them to do
So when they where all finished my father was dead
And I began to hate the men who rode .. the kings horses
I swore that some day they would bleed
The same way that my father did
The way to satisfy my soul
Could only be to kill the man who rode . the kings horses
The time went by and I went big and strong
I still remember those who did wrong
I practiced hard with hands and feet
Still dreaming of the day when I would meet . the kings horses
But a king is a king and a man is a man
When youre poor youre not hard to persuade
And the king had the money and I had the hunger and strength
And he saw I was strong and he bought me
And I forgot my holy oath and rode among the kings horses
And so with pain I had to hide
The crying voice I heard inside
The only way I could survive
Was to become one of the men who ride .. the kings horses
I often thought that it is very strange
The power and the money make you change
Today I kill and rape and fight
Together with the ruthless men who ride the kings horses
got sight of me är jag inte 100 på.
It was a sound like thunder from the sky
And mama said "Dont run and hide"
Its not the thunder but the men who ride . the kings horses
The men sat of outside our little in
The commandant got sight of me and grined
He said while mamas eyes went wide
"Tonight well take your daddy out to ride .. the kings horses"
For a king is a king and a peasant is a peasant
And the laws always made for the king
And the kings men a paid and they do what he tells them to do
So when they where all finished my father was dead
And I began to hate the men who rode .. the kings horses
I swore that some day they would bleed
The same way that my father did
The way to satisfy my soul
Could only be to kill the man who rode . the kings horses
The time went by and I went big and strong
I still remember those who did wrong
I practiced hard with hands and feet
Still dreaming of the day when I would meet . the kings horses
But a king is a king and a man is a man
When youre poor youre not hard to persuade
And the king had the money and I had the hunger and strength
And he saw I was strong and he bought me
And I forgot my holy oath and rode among the kings horses
And so with pain I had to hide
The crying voice I heard inside
The only way I could survive
Was to become one of the men who ride .. the kings horses
I often thought that it is very strange
The power and the money make you change
Today I kill and rape and fight
Together with the ruthless men who ride the kings horses
got sight of me är jag inte 100 på.
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Something's happening inside of me
I was sure that I was really free
From the one that didn't leave me anything but pain
I'm still proud, and I was really sure
That I didn't need you anymore
Then suddenly I realize I'm still in chains
I go to pieces, everytime I see you passing by
And the moments we had, still makes me sad
They're making me cry
I go to pieces, when I know that you're with someone new
And all suddenly I have no pride and I can not hide that I'm loving you
Never thought I'd get a broken heart
Didn't care at all when we did part
Then you suddenly appear and sweep my heart away
You was someone that was left behind
Suddenly you're allways on my mind
And all I can do, is dreaming that you'll come back some day
I go to pieces, everytime I see you passing by
And the moments we had, still makes me sad
They're making me cry
I go to pieces, when I know that you're with someone new
And all suddenly I have no pride and I can not hide that I'm loving you
I go to pieces, cause losing you means only pain
I go to pieces, if I can't have you back again
(Solo)
I go to pieces, when I know that you're with someone new
And all suddenly I have no pride and I can not hide that I'm loving you
(Solo)
I go to pieces, when I know that you're with someone new
And all suddenly I have no pride and I can not hide that I'm loving you
I go to pieces!
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Lite osäker på I'm still proud, men det kan helt klara vara så, resten av texten tycker jag ska stämma.
I was sure that I was really free
From the one that didn't leave me anything but pain
I'm still proud, and I was really sure
That I didn't need you anymore
Then suddenly I realize I'm still in chains
I go to pieces, everytime I see you passing by
And the moments we had, still makes me sad
They're making me cry
I go to pieces, when I know that you're with someone new
And all suddenly I have no pride and I can not hide that I'm loving you
Never thought I'd get a broken heart
Didn't care at all when we did part
Then you suddenly appear and sweep my heart away
You was someone that was left behind
Suddenly you're allways on my mind
And all I can do, is dreaming that you'll come back some day
I go to pieces, everytime I see you passing by
And the moments we had, still makes me sad
They're making me cry
I go to pieces, when I know that you're with someone new
And all suddenly I have no pride and I can not hide that I'm loving you
I go to pieces, cause losing you means only pain
I go to pieces, if I can't have you back again
(Solo)
I go to pieces, when I know that you're with someone new
And all suddenly I have no pride and I can not hide that I'm loving you
(Solo)
I go to pieces, when I know that you're with someone new
And all suddenly I have no pride and I can not hide that I'm loving you
I go to pieces!
[/quote]
Lite osäker på I'm still proud, men det kan helt klara vara så, resten av texten tycker jag ska stämma.
"Ofärdiga texter"
Someday soon, the sun and moon
Will shine the way for me
No more days on crying ways
One day Ill be free
When the trumpets sounds, Ill be of the ground
And Im gonna fly like an eagle in the velvet skies
One fine day Ill be saved and he will take my hand
No more grief, hes with me and he will understand
When the sun goes down the light from him will lead my way
And there only be tomorrow cause there never be no yesterday
Some sweet day he'll come my way and I will be saved
No more tears and no more fears and no more misery
Brighter days in every way, only joy for me
When I hear him call I will leave it all
Walking in this race and forget about my yesterday
One fine day Ill be saved and he will take my hand
No more grief, he's with me and he will understand
When the sun goes down the light from him will lead my way
And there only be tomorrow cause there never be no yesterday
Some sweet day he'll come my way and I will be saved
Some sweet day he'll come my way and I will be saved
Hmm, lite smågay låt när man tänker efter
annars väldigt bra nerskrivet!
Will shine the way for me
No more days on crying ways
One day Ill be free
When the trumpets sounds, Ill be of the ground
And Im gonna fly like an eagle in the velvet skies
One fine day Ill be saved and he will take my hand
No more grief, hes with me and he will understand
When the sun goes down the light from him will lead my way
And there only be tomorrow cause there never be no yesterday
Some sweet day he'll come my way and I will be saved
No more tears and no more fears and no more misery
Brighter days in every way, only joy for me
When I hear him call I will leave it all
Walking in this race and forget about my yesterday
One fine day Ill be saved and he will take my hand
No more grief, he's with me and he will understand
When the sun goes down the light from him will lead my way
And there only be tomorrow cause there never be no yesterday
Some sweet day he'll come my way and I will be saved
Some sweet day he'll come my way and I will be saved
Hmm, lite smågay låt när man tänker efter

annars väldigt bra nerskrivet!
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My life's a pain
Alone again
I wake up missing you each day
I love you so
Why did you go?
Been crying since you went away
This broken heart will never mend
These falling tears will never end
Oh, oh, oh, you got to help me baby
Oh, oh, you got to mend my broken heart
Alone again
I've lost my friend
Oh how it hurts my broken heart
I love you so
Why did you go?
Been crying since we went apart
This broken heart will never mend
Thiese falling tearswill never end
Oh, oh, oh, you got to help me baby
Oh, oh, you got to mend my broken heart
I cry alone each night
Can't get to hold you tight
I'll never ever get over you, over you!
This broken heart will never mend
These falling tears will never end
Oh, oh, oh, you got to help me baby
Oh, oh, you got to mend my broken heart
Mend my broken heart
Mend my broken heart
Mend my broken heart
Mend my broken heart baby
Den här texten tror jag på, tycker den stämmer ihop bra.
Alone again
I wake up missing you each day
I love you so
Why did you go?
Been crying since you went away
This broken heart will never mend
These falling tears will never end
Oh, oh, oh, you got to help me baby
Oh, oh, you got to mend my broken heart
Alone again
I've lost my friend
Oh how it hurts my broken heart
I love you so
Why did you go?
Been crying since we went apart
This broken heart will never mend
Thiese falling tearswill never end
Oh, oh, oh, you got to help me baby
Oh, oh, you got to mend my broken heart
I cry alone each night
Can't get to hold you tight
I'll never ever get over you, over you!
This broken heart will never mend
These falling tears will never end
Oh, oh, oh, you got to help me baby
Oh, oh, you got to mend my broken heart
Mend my broken heart
Mend my broken heart
Mend my broken heart
Mend my broken heart baby
Den här texten tror jag på, tycker den stämmer ihop bra.
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Napoleon
Napoleon, fast han är kort i rocken är det ingen som rår på'n
Napoleon, fast jag var lång och ståtlig blev jag en gång Wellington
Napoleon var fruktad, krut och rök det bruka' lukta där hans män drog fram
Fick en kontinent att döda, alla bävade att möta denne lille man
Nu i våra dagar är han plötsligt här tillbaka i en ny version
Nu är det mig han slagit så jag blir väl knappast någon Wellington
Napoleon, fast han är kort i rocken är det ingen som rår på'n
Napoleon, fast jag var lång och ståtlig blev jag en gång Wellington
Det var brak och dunder å Napoleon la under sig en kontinent
Men vid Waterloo kom slutet, där blev segerraden bruten, ja det är väl känt
Fast i denna här versionen sitter han på segertronen, han har slagit mig
Jag har snöpligen förlorat, för Napoleon har redan vunnit dig
Napoleon, fast han är kort i rocken är det ingen som rår på'n
Napoleon, fast jag var lång och ståtlig blev jag en gång Wellington
(Solo)
Fast i denna här versionen sitter han på segertronen, han har slagit mig
Jag har snöpligen förlorat, för Napoleon har redan vunnit dig
Napoleon, fast han är kort i rocken är det ingen som rår på'n
Napoleon, fast jag var lång och ståtlig blev jag en gång Wellington
Napoleon, Napoleon, Napoleon, Napoleon
Hmm, jag har skrivt en gång, fast det kan mycket väl vara något annat, passar ju inte in i texten. Men ingen har jag svårt att få det till.
Napoleon, fast han är kort i rocken är det ingen som rår på'n
Napoleon, fast jag var lång och ståtlig blev jag en gång Wellington
Napoleon var fruktad, krut och rök det bruka' lukta där hans män drog fram
Fick en kontinent att döda, alla bävade att möta denne lille man
Nu i våra dagar är han plötsligt här tillbaka i en ny version
Nu är det mig han slagit så jag blir väl knappast någon Wellington
Napoleon, fast han är kort i rocken är det ingen som rår på'n
Napoleon, fast jag var lång och ståtlig blev jag en gång Wellington
Det var brak och dunder å Napoleon la under sig en kontinent
Men vid Waterloo kom slutet, där blev segerraden bruten, ja det är väl känt
Fast i denna här versionen sitter han på segertronen, han har slagit mig
Jag har snöpligen förlorat, för Napoleon har redan vunnit dig
Napoleon, fast han är kort i rocken är det ingen som rår på'n
Napoleon, fast jag var lång och ståtlig blev jag en gång Wellington
(Solo)
Fast i denna här versionen sitter han på segertronen, han har slagit mig
Jag har snöpligen förlorat, för Napoleon har redan vunnit dig
Napoleon, fast han är kort i rocken är det ingen som rår på'n
Napoleon, fast jag var lång och ståtlig blev jag en gång Wellington
Napoleon, Napoleon, Napoleon, Napoleon
Hmm, jag har skrivt en gång, fast det kan mycket väl vara något annat, passar ju inte in i texten. Men ingen har jag svårt att få det till.